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Here I'd think the dip into present tense is to create a sense of experiential immediacy as he gets into the flesh of the memory, then back to past tense where there is some cognitive distance from the situation.
This is quite common for athletes being interviewed. They will talk about the game in the past tense but discuss specific plays as if they are in the moment. Also every reality tv show has some of this. Where you will watch a scene spliced with the actor/participant discussing it as if it's happening now.