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Words never woven / Captivating all the same / Never had, but still lost (lemm.ee)
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spoilerMy personal interpretation of/reaction to the French Dispatch

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Blinding white pages / Curses and criticisms / How do I do this (lemm.ee)
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spoilerWriter's block

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corner working mom / crying on your cereal / tears instead of milk (lemmy.zip)
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Titleyour mom

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i tried to write a / good haiku but it was one / syllable short (lemmy.blahaj.zone)
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this one is called "too short haiku"

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Each blink is effort / No questions to me, I hope / Please give me water (lemm.ee)
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Tap for spoilerhigh in class

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A hungry feeling / lets grab a quick bite to eat / make it much faster (feddit.nl)
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SpoilerFast food restaurants

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Broader horizons / A sense of community / The future is bright (lemm.ee)
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spoilerLemmy :)

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Heavy heavy eyes / What was I thinking about / yawn I'm yawn fine yawn (lemm.ee)
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spoilerStaying up late working

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Always feeling tired / Autumn is fast approaching / The years lead us here (lemm.ee)
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"Time"

Just a middle-aged guy feeling this way.

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I'd like to do it / Wish I'd done it already / Still haven't started (lemm.ee)
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spoilerProcrastination

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Screens everywhere / clickety-clack on keyboards / coffee smell pervades (feddit.nl)
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Click to revealOffice life

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I'll try to attach / a message to this arrow... / Poem for you, sir (media.tenor.com)
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A garden of green / Thumbs oh how I love being / A serial killer (lemm.ee)
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Pretty self explanatory, don't you think?

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Tick tick tick tick tick / Each second, minute, hour / Flows through its taut hands (lemm.ee)
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reveal titleA (mechanical) watch

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Not green but not blue / Not too dark and not too rich / But just the right hue (lemm.ee)
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reveal titleTeal

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Worlds and worlds and worlds / Each alive and not so well / The heavens beckon (lemm.ee)
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reveal titleThe Cosmere [email protected]

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Up and down and up / Nothing is solved for that long / More and less than thought (lemm.ee)
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spoiler(Scientific) Research

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Too long, didn't read / Use seventeen syllables / Show me what you got (lemm.ee)
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reveal titleHaiku

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The neverending / Story, yours or mine, who knows / Just might be ours (lemm.ee)
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reveal titlehomo sapiens

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A shiny layer / On decaying foundations / Have we ever grown? (lemm.ee)
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reveal titleSociety

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Sunlight on my pancakes / Light hearts and smiling faces / A meal out of time (lemm.ee)
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reveal titleBrunch

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Upon metal banks / Crash the saturated waves / Rushing the white sea (lemm.ee)
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reveal titleFountain pens