Comradeship // Freechat

2168 readers

2 users here now

Talk about whatever, respecting the rules established by Lemmygrad. Failing to comply with the rules will grant you a few warnings, insisting on breaking them will grant you a beautiful shiny banwall.

A community for comrades to chat and talk about whatever doesn't fit other communities

founded 3 years ago

MODERATORS

[email protected]

What if its all a lie? poem (lemmygrad.ml)

submitted 2 months ago* (last edited 2 months ago) by [email protected] to c/[email protected]

18 comments fedilink hide all child comments

We are all soldiers pre-manufactured, asleep in a psychedelic liquid, fractured. Awash in false memory. To one day wake full of righteous anger toward our enemy, built to hate the systems embedded within us. Assembled, with a destructive lust to live only in our dreams.

you are viewing a single comment's thread
view the rest of the comments

[–] [email protected] 0 points 2 months ago (1 children)

It has poem in the title, fellas.

Good work. I would suggest formatting a seperation between each stanza/line; to make it more "poetic".

[–] [email protected] 0 points 2 months ago

HAHAHA, I added 'poem' to the title after most of these comments were made.